What I have done well this week     

My learning goal was to put in punctuation

This week I have done well in writing. I have completed my paragraph for Mr A’s story and started my own. I think I have done great and I am proud seeing as I have made two paragraphs that are full of wow words. I have improved on putting in lots of punctuation in my story and wow words. I think that open mindedness and curiosity might of helped I wasn’t not open minded or curious but I wish I had been more curious and open minded.

And here is the evidence

Wally soon arrived at His Mum (Harriet’s) house.

“HHeelloo” declared Wally “However it is go and annoy Mr and Mrs Marywin they deserve a taste of their own medicine” Harriet replied angrily “the irritating couple, boy do they NOT know anything”, “Mum that's not very nice” claimed Wally.

“oh its you come on in I’m so sorry I was just…” being mean about Mr and Mrs Marywin yes I know” whispered Wally “I know you don’t like them but they were like 2nd parents to me and you know that I don’t like you talking about them like that!” mumbled Wally under his breath. “Maybe so but I am your real mother and I command you to not even mention their names or last names in this family they shall now be known as enemies as if we are the British and they are the Turks and they’re names shall be known as a horrid swear word and you are forbidden to see Mr and Mrs Marywin whoops I said the new naughty word! anyway...” “Mum” interrupted Wally “ can I just have some breakfast?”